Best page EVER <3 i love this page all bits of Asagi / Ruka makes it sexy <3 XD

and iof course drawn wonderfully as always. your lines are so carefree and beautiful to watch being built in to a drawing

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I don't think I have enough to write for a critique but I can tell you a few things.
You've good, strong, confident lines, but I can tell you've done these by observation, try and have more confidence in your imagination.

All-in-all, this is really good work, keep at it 8)

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Thanks, will do so, you wont see it for a while I still have aload of sketches to put up!
~(I got lazy and couldnt be bothered with any more)

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I can't write a critique, so to say, but I will post one here ^.^!

This is the best of your sketchbook pages I have seen. Great use of space. The objects are fairly well drawn as well. Most likely the best hand i have EVER seen you draw.

To help your drawing I am going to challenge you to a rather difficult task. You are stroking your figures in your drawing in short lines. This is called Multi-stroking. Not only is this really bad for your wrist, it's really bad for your eyes. It will take a lot of work, but try drawing direct lines. If you make the line wrong, it's fine. Erase and try again. ^.^! this will help your art become more sensitive.

Alright! Keep up the hard work!!

~Becca

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Really looking forward to seeing more

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But dad, if I can only date Asian girls and not White ones too, how will I have half cast Final Fantasy Babies?!

More going/gone up today <3

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Hi Becca, just a quickie, thankyou for the advice, but what is a direct line? Do you mean one singular line?

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That doesn't make sense, she's using short, strong flicks to help her with the direction of her lines, all artists do it.

Only tattoo artists use the lines you are talking about or artists that are trying for a certain type of effect.
Not to mention its better then then notorious "furry line".

I've been drawing this way for years and my eyes and wrists are fine.
Have no clue what you're talking about, sorry to sound rude.

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But dad, if I can only date Asian girls and not White ones too, how will I have half cast Final Fantasy Babies?!